Character Design: Film Noir "Bad Cop"

SO...this assignment is really awesome. We were given a film noir description of Gregorious, a captain who has been indicted a few times, because basically he executes justice with a knee to the groin or a kick to the ribs. Here is the description, and below that are the images I have started to develop:

The homicide skipper that year was a Captain Gregorius, a type of copper that is getting rarer but by no means extinct, the kind that solves crimes with a bright light, the soft sap, the kick to the kidneys, the knee to the groin, the fist to the solar plexus, the night stick to the base of the spine. Six month later he was indicted for perjury before a grand jury, booted without trial, and later stamped to death by a big stallion on his ranch in Wyoming.
Right now I was his raw meat. He sat behind his desk with his coat off and his sleeves rolled almost to his shoulders. He was as bald as a bick and getting heavy around the waist like all hard-muscled men in middle age. His eyes were fish gray. His big nose was a network of burst capillaries. He was drinking coffee and not quietly. His blunt strong hands had hairrs thick on thei backs. Grizzled tufts stuck out of his ears. He pawned something on his desk and looked at Green.

SO! Please let me know your thoughts on what works, what you would add or change. thanx